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The Fiery CrossThe following report compares books using the SERCount Rating (base on the result count from the search engine). |
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Aftersleep Books - 2005-06-20 07:00:00 | © Copyright 2004 - www.aftersleep.com () | sitemap | top |
Brianna's leaking breasts and the state of Jemmy's diapers are described ad nausem in this book. We get it already, her breasts leak. What was the author thinking? I realize this is realistic for a nursing mother but is it necessary for the reader to read about it in detail quite so much? How does it move the story forward or advance the plot in any way? Or even contribute to her character? The book in general? I think the author could have shaved about 200 pages out of this book by getting rid of the worthless, repetitive descriptions.
I hope the next one is better but I'm sorry to say that this one is very slow moving and frankly, boring.