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[PaullyPokketz]

I know i said i dont usually write poems, but I just got an idea. I thought of an opening line, and just took it from there. I just finished it, so if there's any errors, please tell me. THANKS!

Misery entwines
With happiness.
Anger waltzes
With glee.

To fall in love,
And fall apart,
Would be called the
Biography of me.

The touch of your skin,
The sweet satin sash.
Would tickle my senses,
Yet give me whiplash.

Love is a rollercoaster,
Whirling my brain.
I feel like a child,
Yet overcome by pain.

Engrossed in your body,
Your wonderful flavor,
The day we join,
Is the day I savor.

I can feel your emotions,
Your skin under mine.
I’ll lie to myself,
And say that I’m fine.

But without you here close,
I don’t feel the same.
I’m so madly in love,
Yet I don’t know your name.

You’re looking at me,
I’m looking at you,
I can see you,
But can you see me, too?

It’s too late to answer,
You leave down the street.
I think I’ve gone insane,
And heck, I’m still asleep!

[Bomadeno]

I like the imagery.. and for me to like a poem's imagery is quite unusual...

[nil]

I like the poem.. and for me to like a poem is also quite unusual...

[Insanity test]

I like it too. It's actually quite usual for me to like poems, but they have to be god ones.

[Bomadeno]

God ones?

[Insanity test]

err sorry. Good ones.

[Pimienta]

wow
that is wonderful