Make up some Haikus and write them here where people can comment.I know people have posted Haikus before, but this thread is for Haiku s only.
REMEMBER the rule for a Haiku is 5 syllables 7 syllables then 5 again
heres one im going to make up right now
Tired, it's night time
slowly i become sleepy
to tired to sleep
heres another one because i like it
summer is hotter then
winter, spring and fall all are
but it has berries
yeah those two are okay i think
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by nowhere man on Wed Aug 10, 2005 5:12 am
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by GoodGrief on Sat Aug 13, 2005 6:28 am
Bored and sleeplessly
Plodding through stalls and raffles
Excitement. Soiree.
Plodding through stalls and raffles
Excitement. Soiree.
-GG
What exactly is meant by the above statement I may never know.
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by Math_nerd on Mon Aug 22, 2005 4:05 am
our friend the earthworm,
how does he ever get clean?
he washes in dirt.
-my dad
how does he ever get clean?
he washes in dirt.
-my dad
Our heads are round - So that our thoughts may fly out in all directions.
Even the greatest of whales is helpless in the desert.
Even the greatest of whales is helpless in the desert.
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by Insanity test on Thu Sep 01, 2005 11:57 pm
Hard are this life's trials.
Come through them in time we must
rest waits at the end.
Come through them in time we must
rest waits at the end.
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by GoodGrief on Mon Sep 05, 2005 5:22 am
At some point in life
We all come to realise
Chocolate is quite fine
I write this on the first day of three days that I will be spending, through my own free will, without the company of blessed chocolate. Wish me luck!
We all come to realise
Chocolate is quite fine
I write this on the first day of three days that I will be spending, through my own free will, without the company of blessed chocolate. Wish me luck!
-GG
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Penguin Haku
by nil on Mon Sep 05, 2005 7:55 am
Penguin goes to bed.
Take off his tuxedo.
Got a cold and sneeze...
Take off his tuxedo.
Got a cold and sneeze...
...
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by GoodGrief on Mon Sep 05, 2005 9:38 pm
Line 2 only has 6 syllables. And penguins are a mass hallucination experienced by seals and polar bears and eskimos for millenia, and now it's affecting us too!
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by nil on Tue Sep 06, 2005 1:19 am
Ok, here's the count of syllables....
Take - off - hi - s - Ta - xe - do..
So all you need is to split "his" into "hiiiiii-ssss", then it will work perfectly...
If it's borken, make it not broken...
Take - off - hi - s - Ta - xe - do..
So all you need is to split "his" into "hiiiiii-ssss", then it will work perfectly...
If it's borken, make it not broken...
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by GoodGrief on Tue Sep 06, 2005 9:56 pm
A much more open-minded philosophy than 'if it's borken, fix it,' actually. It bears thinking about.
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by Math_nerd on Fri Sep 09, 2005 5:29 am
If somthiing that matters is broken, say a pipe in the bacement, and you pretend it isn't broken, where does that leave you? I don't know what this has to do with borken but............
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Ocean Haiku
by nil on Wed Sep 14, 2005 5:02 am
Deep in the Ocean,
Is where the eels lay their eggs,
Darkly and Shockly.
See, it's a matching pair.
Is where the eels lay their eggs,
Darkly and Shockly.
See, it's a matching pair.
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by Insanity test on Thu Sep 15, 2005 10:53 pm
bed time approaches
Theres too much stuff on my bed
sleep on the sofa.
Theres too much stuff on my bed
sleep on the sofa.
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